Mock Structure Question for English Language Paper 1, Question 3

The extract is from close to the start of Eye of the World, just in case any of them have been watching the wheel of time. Great books FYI. It's the part where Rand is saving his father. It is useful for covering several hero tropes, which is why I've chosen it for a mock paper. This sheet is just the extract, reminders to keep their language and structure annotation separate, and some model structure analysis answers, so they can see likely pitfalls.